(i'll) act just like oil,
(in a) nest made of straw,,
(while) tacky i'll foil your plans... rest assured.

(each) floor elevated,
(ele)vating each flaw,,
(your) story / your travels / your score door to door.

(i'll) watch you unravel,
(and es)cape from such clutches,,
(then) laugh when the cost of your fate gets corrupted.

(a) pale white face,
(in a) maze of amasement,,
(be)gins to take shape at the reins of complacent.

(sooooo) desperate to steer,
(de)spite all my effort,,
(to) show you i'm here and your life is my vessel.



  1. Mangledaftermath2015

    Mangledaftermath2015 441 days ago Permalink

    Woopsy, one too many pain killers last night for mangled!. hahaha. I had a real hoot scribbling this one out, kinda like punching a boxing bag (to me anyway).


    More pain killers right now actually, a bit of surgery was completed today. WOOHOO... although the doctor shitted me off by not perscribing a fresh coarse of antibiotics, (shaking my fist in thin air now),, "i've only got one 'metronide' pill left in my current coarse". hahaha.

    although, metronide activates with food,, and his orders were not to eat for 24hrs. So i can't actually complete the coarse of antibiotics from earlier in the week...

    Hmm, is this guy trying to boost his consultation visits by initially not perscribing antibiotics,, and also sabotaging my slim chance of staving off an infection. Hmm... probably not.

    Am i just a paranoid 80's dude, bangin on forever about my script,, and the bus driver going too fast!. hahaha. yep,,


  2. KPissed

    KPissed 440 days ago Permalink

    Mangled, I hear your pain. At least you are able to channel that shit into a work of poetic art.

    Hope all goes well with your medical issues man.

    KPissed - Who also loves it when they say don't eat starting at midnight before a procedure - to everyone, regardless if its at 8 am, 10 am or 3 fucking pm the next day!

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